Sunday, April 25, 2010
Blog Response
I like my paper about the epigraphs from into the wild. I feel that this paper has the best supporting arguments and the epigraphs really help to support my claims. I also feel that this paper has the best flow of the papers I have written although it could be better. While I like this paper, it could be better. As I mentioned before the flow could always be better and the word choice could use some improvements to make the paper sound better overall.
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I think the best place to start improving flow and word choice is the transitions. If you were to go through your essay and read all your transitions as well as what comes directly before and after them, you could edit them in a way that would improve the overall flow of the paper. In doing this you could also look closely at your word choice in these transitions and edit them accordingly.
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